this is funny and it sucks

weirdos
standing outside my house
i am stoned
they are asking for my brother
i am stoned
i give them my brother
he is stoned
and then they eat him
i wake up
weird dream.

 

very sureal......love the abstract nature of this poem....and the repetition lends to it seeming like a recouring dream........:sunny:

 

lol thank you

 

mostly though it just....

 

hahahahahahahahah.....

ahahahahahahahaha......
hahahaha...
aaaahhhhhhh...
...

.......
bbbbbbaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahaha
ahahahahahahahaha
ha
.....hahaha...hahaha.hahaha...........ha!

Dude, good write!

 

...thanks lol

 

awesome

 

!

 

Poor brother!

 

no it doesn't suck .. love ya!

 

Nope, doesn't suck. I like the "i am stoned" mantra.

 

Tell you what? That's the first time I've laughed out loud in an internet cafe.


Cool.

Peace,
Aidan