Subconscious Unity

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by zilla939, Jun 12, 2007.

  1. zilla939

    zilla939 Thought Police Lifetime Supporter

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    There is something within every human being
    That is of another world
    Within which we all exist
    If only subconsciously,
    And within this sacred place there resides
    A primitive sense of bliss
    And a peaceful desire for what is good and wholesome
    And good and wholesome alone.
    As childhood departs
    This utopia is buried, smothered, forgotten,
    Sometimes lost,
    Sometimes never recovered,
    But still, it is there,
    And if all of society’s and humanity’s sinful desires vanished,
    All that would exist would be this ancient wisdom,
    This knowing that is beyond all words,
    This understanding that is comprehensible only in thought
    And that every language seeks to express
    Yet never quite does.
    And in this unadulterated realization,
    All warring would cease,
    All discord would end,
    All hate would disperse,
    And all greedy desires would dissipate,
    And all that would remain would be,
    As the English language so simply terms it,
    Love.
     
  2. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

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    Really beautiful, I love it!
     
  3. WoodRat

    WoodRat Banned

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    Otherwise known as the MACK TRUCK.


    Good write zilla!
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    I really like it. That's kind of all there is to say.
     
  5. zilla939

    zilla939 Thought Police Lifetime Supporter

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    thank you, lovers.
     
  6. blackheartbitch

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    i like it plain and simple i dont kno y but i do
     
  7. TR1PP

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    I know.....
     
  8. zilla939

    zilla939 Thought Police Lifetime Supporter

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    isn't it funny how language is the reason we can express though, yet it limits our scope of thought so much?
     

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