revenged

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Jun 24, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    You fall to the floor
    I hear the echoes
    come across my blackened heart
    that you torched with pain
    and then doused with longing.

    No matter where you go
    the knowledge of my pain
    will haunt you
    and stand before your bed at night.

    You make a face
    toward the sky that tells me
    what you're thinking
    that all of this was a mistake.

    I wait for you to wake
    so I can see your face
    as I slit you open
    and you painfully bleed out.
     
  2. trekker

    trekker Intrepid Traveler

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    Very vengeful and angry. I like it though. True feelings exposed.
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    yeah nice one
     
  4. Naoki_ninja

    Naoki_ninja Bruce Lee's hero

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    Brutal outlook. Nice.
     
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