annie`s love letter to me.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by laurenbaillieee, Jun 24, 2007.

  1. laurenbaillieee

    laurenbaillieee Member

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    your mind is racing;which way to go?
    the first time we met, you sold me your soul.
    the mark of the beast, you now obtain,
    life as you knew it has become hard to maintain.
    your heart is pounding &your bones begin to ache,
    as you sit &wonder, "how much more can i take?"
    there's no more sleeping;fighting demons within,
    with this spin, your new life begins.
    you're numb inside &again you've lied,
    continuing to fly until there's nothing inside.
    you begin to scream as the needle hits your arm,
    &the rush you feel afterwards is no need for alarm.
    "is this all really worth it?" you begin to question,
    but with my consolances, here we are with your latest obsession.
    i'll never leave you, like the others did,
    i'll stay right beside you until i feel your life has been lived.
    you think you have friends, but you're really alone,
    they followed me first &will watch you become bones.
    your mother sought after you, but you were not there,
    it's i, you can thank, for stealing your ability to care.
    staring into the mirror;no longer recognize your face,
    cold, black eyes with no emotion behind,
    you pathetically chase me &it is i that you find.
    as you shoot me, smoke me, snort me, &plead,
    i'll sit back &watch you bleed; i am well pleased;;;;;
    hello, again, precious;it's your old friend, Speed.


    yaaa;i wrote this last night.
    just wanted some feedback on it.
    &of course, it's about crystal.
    but yaaa;give me somethinggg.
    peacelove&completehappiness;
    lauren.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    its good...but culd be more gruesome and heartfelt with gory
     
  3. Wildchild22

    Wildchild22 Member

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    Hows this for poetry??

    Ahem....

    Oh wet pet.

    (im talking about my fish danny mosca hes a black fish)
     

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