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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Jun 25, 2007.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    kill me

    fucking rip me apart
    what's the matter
    why cant you do it
    you've already done it
    to my heart

    i've sat back
    and let you kill my soul
    i've let the depression
    wash over me but i'm done
    i'm demanding of you
    kill me now

    youre too
    fucking scared of the world
    to rip me apart like you did
    to my heart you dont want
    to end my pain you just want
    to make me snap

    i snap
    i see your guts splash
    all over the fucking floor
    your agonized scream
    dies on the wind as i laugh
    and fly away




    i dont know what to call this or where it even came from...any ideas for a title (or where it came from) or improvements...?
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    thank you lol i try
     
  3. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    lol u shuld call it "mother"...i kno where it came from. after we fucking kill that mutha fuckin bitch that ripped ur fucking heart apart babe we can move on to scum and fucking kill his ass cuz we dont deserve this fucking shit.
     
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