About someone I used to love or thought so. You sparked my heart and started a fire yet you were never there to see it transpire did you fear a heartbreak? did you fear a heartache? I saw perfection in your eyes, and fell for it without choice. I heard the beauty of your voice, and it drew me closer.. to an end without choice. you sparked my heart and started a fire and left as soon as it started to transpire
i really like this part : "I saw perfection in your eyes, and fell for it without choice. I heard the beauty of your voice, and it drew me closer.." really good =] peace
"to an end without choice. you sparked my heart and started a fire and left as soon as it started to transpire" i really liked this part...it shows the pain of loosing someone that u had once thought you loved and then found that it was all just a big fake...i can so relate to this poem.
That would be a dream coming true mixx I have a couple more poems posted in this forum , would love to turn them all into songs someday
Hey I just finished recording a song recently on my keyboard (its all ambient). I dont think its super perfect but its really good in my opinion, and quite relaxing as well. If your in a bad mood however, dont listen to it cause it will only make things worse Anyway, Ill send it to you so you can decide if you want your lyrics in it. Are you a good singer? If not Ill see what I can do and maybe Ill be able to pull it off (my voice is usually well tuned). And when its complete I can either distribute it on the net or Ill make it so you can make some money off it . pm me if interested Its over 13 mins though, and your song is really short so Ill have to get creative while mixing this one
well done, and from there you continue, and make more progress in the works. Keep strong dude. Peace.
