short poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by scruuuub, Jun 28, 2007.

  1. scruuuub

    scruuuub Member

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    hey guys haven't been around much cause 1 - my internet was off for ages and 2 - just been busy with music and art .. this one is short , just about a dream i had and just started writing a few lines during breakfast today about what it was like and how where i was is different to the world just for fun , enjoy =]

    #1 Dream [​IMG]

    on a cloud in the strawberry skies​
    lost in my mind and free to dance ​
    noone here to judge whats real​
    noone here except for me ​


    floating over a vanilla river ​
    everythings the way i want ​
    all is blurry through my lazy eyes​
    until all fades to black ​


    and i'm back to deal with here​
     
  2. GeorgeHippieGirl

    GeorgeHippieGirl Member

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    i like it, especially the last line.
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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  4. blackheartbitch

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    me likey it especially the last line
     
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