check this if you dig love poems

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by thcinfectedhair, Jun 28, 2007.

  1. thcinfectedhair

    thcinfectedhair Member

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    There once was a feeble loathsome king
    tainted with ugliness and hate
    a king of nothingness but rats in a sewer
    who lived under darkness spells

    and in the moonlit sky he would scream
    utter words of rotten hiss and pain
    as the sky above starts to piss with rain
    his eyes start to water with the salt of ache
    he will never start to bleed

    he paced his gates
    with his anger like fire paving in his thoughts
    he was outnumbered by his own
    he gazed in the stars christening with light
    he tripped his tail underneath the moonlight
    and drenched his life with a scent rich in death
    he stood up to his surprise was the sun to rise?
    It certainly had its glow
    did his eyes deceive?
    Or had he finally slipped insane?

    As the black in his eyes shrank from the white
    he could feel the scheme of fight loosen and erupt
    throughout his body he feels the infection
    he cannot see through the foreign light
    what in gods name is this hellish possession
    of passion

    the wind starts to die and noticed his blood has been drawn
    a new day starts through his veins
    he reaches in the energy to feel the enemy
    and to his surprise as he nears the numbing bright
    he is holding on to ruby red angel hair
    burning with heartache and entity
    she was so beautiful he did not want her to leave his site
    for all eternity

    she was scorned with life
    the storm of wicked delight continued in his dome
    as the small king thinks thoughts of obsess
    she embraced his hand
    it was felt up with needles and sin
    and pressed her lips to his disease infested face
    simply dancing these words to his flea rotting ear
    I love you

    flawless like a jewel and with great wings of a bird
    she fluttered like a butterfly into the heart of the sky
    as the sky no longer cries
    he stands so proud
    thick parasitic thoughts still cloud his mind
    but blinding a demon like sin to a cross
    he is so sick with love

    wondering if the angel will fill his lungs with tongue
    wondering if the silver lining of the sky is her
    will she ever come back he is so lovesick
    impregnated with her song
    her so simple lullaby of words
    I love you he murmured in the cold night

    excited seeds start to grow throughout his gloom
    feeling bolder , younger and older
    he cuts his skin to see the incision
    he likes to watch the cut
    placing the razor in the hurricane of his soul
    the frost runs through the flood of blood
    the smell evanescent
    and a bloody red rose sits like a flag on his bed
    waiting patiently to be wed

    days go by
    and thousands of roses more
    she still never comes
    comforting laughter in the corner of his mind
    knowing he created the sound
    his heart starts to pound
    with his delicate teeth he bites his time
    and now he is down on one knee
    please give me sanity
    he is so sick with love and vanity
    he is losing his vitality
    and feeling his insanity
    I suffer from this heartache

    he says while he engraves the words by the dozens
    in his mind
    she isn’t coming back and my bliss just will never be
    that night he died in his bed
    his soul levitated to the heavens while lashing with light
    his hand filled with a bouquet of the roses
    while the angel awaits in the clouds of mushrooms
    he ran through the sky and tripped his foot on his tail
    and spilled his bouquet
    she reached his tail turned him upright like his world
    he gazed through her eyes as if she was transparent
    I cannot see through such beauty
    he wept but he was so thirsty for her kiss
    she was even more radiant than he could remember
    she bent down and wiped his tear and kissed his lips
    to turn him to an angel of purity
    they rode off in love
    for all eternity
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    beautiful...i dont neccessarily like love poems but i really liked this one
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    this is a really good poem
     
  4. GeorgeHippieGirl

    GeorgeHippieGirl Member

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    wow amazing poem, i love it. thanks for posting!
     
  5. Gothika

    Gothika Member

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    beautiful poem, i fucking LOVED IT! :)
     
  6. cometogether_22

    cometogether_22 Member

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    this was brilliant =) i'm not a fan of sappy type love poems but this one was beautiful.. you are a great writer :)
     
  7. WoodRat

    WoodRat Banned

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    TCH, You're an Artist.

    CHEERS!
    Peace and Love.
     
  8. thcinfectedhair

    thcinfectedhair Member

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    thank you very much, this made me smile
     

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