intermittent repose

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TomDijon, Jul 1, 2007.

  1. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    intermittent repose
    intermittent repose​

    let me reprose;​

    time froze​

    I sense apprehension...​

    an apprehension, perhaps, also of apprehension​

    wait...
    see​

    what we are​

    is much more then we believe
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    wow so simple but so powerful...i like ur style of writing
     
  3. tomandhismuse

    tomandhismuse Banned

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    I like that, it is very effective and it is powerful also. Good work!
    Peace
     
  4. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    thank you

    this forum doesn't seem to be too active though, huh?
     
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