Poem from a single father

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Littlwing70, Jul 6, 2007.

  1. Littlwing70

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    My Faces

    One face a father
    Determined, well intentioned
    Rock solid, fully committed
    One face a mother
    Soft spoken, always open
    Warm smile, never broken
    One face a friend
    Protecting and defending
    Always fun, hours pretending
    One face a boy
    Helpless, so defenseless
    Often curious, but clueless
    One face a lover
    Incomplete, nothing concrete
    Left abandoned, feeling obsolete

    These are my faces, my feelings inside
    My parts to act out, my scars to hide
    Some are not comfortable or easy to bear
    But they are all mine, my faces to wear
     
  2. Littlwing70

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    Its hard to be a single parent regardless of sex, i just am a single father so this is my view.
     
  3. RexLee

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    wow, that was an amazing poem i really liked it
     
  4. hoperenefeese

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    love it that is amazing
     
  5. blackheartbitch

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    it was good. showed the struggles u have being a single parent
     
  6. hoperenefeese

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    i really love this, you can tell you really put thought into this
    and it is a refection of youre life. well done
     
  7. Littlwing70

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    Thank you so much everyone for the positive comments. Life can be hard.
     
  8. RexLee

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    just hand to stop in and read it again, and still loved it as much as the first time :)
     
  9. scruuuub

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    very good ! i enjoyed reading it alot

    peace and love
     
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