take me to the sea

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Headlight_ona_train, Jul 12, 2007.

  1. Headlight_ona_train

    Headlight_ona_train Member

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    Take me to the sea

    Where the waves roll softly onto the shore

    Take me to the sea

    Where the birds dance on the wind

    Take me to the sea

    Where the air smells of salt and blows cool

    Take me to the sea

    Where the sun is swallowed by water

    Take me to the sea

    With my friend beside me

    Take me to the sea

    Where we can kiss on the sand under a big old moon

    Take me to the sea
     
  2. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    very sweet and innocent, I like it.
     
  3. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    It made me very melancholic. Somebody please come and take me to the sea. After living most of my life within reach of a beach, I'm now 9 hours by bus from the closest salt water.


    Nice.......

    Peace,
    Aidan
     
  4. hippyhappy

    hippyhappy Member

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    That was beautiful. So simple. I want to go the beach now with the one I love. It captures the magical place that the sea is. No matter what beach you go to, you always get that sense of freedom and excitement, that the possibilities are endless near the sea, the world's end. Really great! I'm going to go to the beah now and think of that poem!
     
  5. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    i like that poem! i wish i was near a beach lol!
     
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