Another Night

Another Night ​

Another night of subtle slumber​

your words have adopted my thoughts​

speaking but i don't understand​

wild images scattered in my mind ​

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In awakeness i still stop to think​

giving away what you can't get back​

my friend , you'll end up in tears ​

please don't make me feel blue​

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wait for love that's true​

 

I liked this piece. I agree with what your saying here. It takes time for love. Keep writing hun! -Cassi

 

ohh wow...

i read this and likes it specially the first verse and then i saw your age and was impressed. Keep writing.

 

thank you for the lovely feedback =] impressed by my age ? well i guess its my lifestyle , all i do is write music and poetry all day and sometimes i like to paint or draw. Even in school i don't really like many subjects other than english , music and art (although i'm quite fond of history) and put all my effort into those subjects , and i'll never stop , i love music , poetry and art so much !

peace

 

thats really good

 

very good.

this is my favorite one i've read from you yet!:H

 

oops sorry..the same comment posted twice.

 

sounds like me in school.