She

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The Instinct, Jul 12, 2007.

  1. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    Again, another poem of another time in less evil times, something of hope, something of love. Again, all replies, comments are very welcome. Enjoy.


    She is a person many long for
    A person to hold, a person to lean on
    She is a person to talk to when needed
    A friend who is as close as they come

    She is a person who you can trust
    She'll give you a special look everyday
    A look that doesn't describe lies or a game
    It's a look that you know will always be there

    She is a person who listens and knows what's right
    She'll tell you to go off and do what you enjoy
    There will be no hard feelings because she's always there
    She won't hurt you, She won't steal from you

    She is a person who could be anybody
    Anybody from a past girlfriend to someone you've never met
    Even a neighbor to someone you created in your mind
    You'll make the decision when the time is right

    She is a person who appreciates the thoughts you tell
    She'll never steer you wrong or put you in a position
    She has a heart that never stops giving the love you need
    You'll appreciate who she is for who she is without a second thought

    She is a person, not just a word on paper
    She is a person you can describe, which many things can't be
    She is a person that's been put into shape and figure
    A song that doesn't need words because the feeling is already there

    Many call this feeling a wife
    Many have called it love
    I ask myself how I can write about such a person
    My only answer is that She might come to me in time

    She is a being I want in my life,
    Without feeling guilt or sorrow that I met her.
    She was never "out of my league", She was always in it.
    She is a thought I can sometimes picture in my imagination...

    She may have cried at nights wanting someone of the same
    You may have climbed many mountains and more to find her
    All you can do is hope and wait that she'll come along someday

    c. 2000
     
  2. hoperenefeese

    hoperenefeese Member

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    One word, WOW, that is A PERFECT esample of pouring your heart and soul out on paper, and not needing it to ryhm, cause it is from your heart,
    awsome...very awsome
     
  3. myself

    myself just me

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    about a person meant for me, a soul mate: i don't know...
     
  4. children of korn

    children of korn Member

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    i voted yes......great poem
     
  5. deram_scholzara

    deram_scholzara Member

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    "She is a person who could be anybody
    Anybody from a past girlfriend to someone you've never met
    Even a neighbor to someone you created in your mind
    You'll make the decision when the time is right"

    That is my favorite stanza, I love it. I like that you even cover the idea that this perfect match might only exist in your imagination, yet they still exist.
     
  6. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    OH WOW this is truly amazing
     
  7. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    thank you all.
     
  8. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    about having a soul mate, i don't know. i hope so. but that is a beautiful poem! i absolutely love it! :)
     
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