Cause and Effect

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The Instinct, Jul 16, 2007.

  1. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    again, all thoughts/comments are welcome


    Name calling causes weakness, depression
    Depression causes anger, irritability
    Anger leads to hate and judgment
    Hate leads to suffering of self or others
    Suffering breeds suffering, destruction
    Destruction breeds fear
    Fear causes panic
    Panic is a reaction to hopelessness
    Hopelessness spawned from depression
    Depression leads to suicide
    Suicide is linked to weakness
    And weakness occurred because of a name
    If a name can do all this
    Then we need to evaluate the connection to the name
    The name is connected to the source
    The source is connected to why we feel the way we do
    We've only forgotten
    The name caller just caused a reaction
    Of a memory in a fraction of time
    In the middle of all this
    A "chemical reaction" in our brain occurred
    One that makes a "personality"
    The "personality" is connected to how we learn
    How we learn is caused from how we were taught
    How we were taught breeds who we are
    Who we are makes who we become
    Who we become effects others
    Others effect who we are
    If others effect who we are
    Then a "chemical reaction" happens again
    If more than one "chemical reaction" can happen
    It creates an imbalance
    The imbalance is linked to suffering
    Suffering was linked to destruction
    So if we take a look around
    It looks like we're all imbalanced
    Sounds to me like a silent plague
    One that can't be treated by medication
    But tender loving care
    Tender loving care can be missed
    When called a name or judged
    And if judged wrongly it creates anger
    Endless cycles of the mind in anger and destruction
    Because tender loving care is done without
    Tender loving care is disrupted by improper disciplin
    Improper disciplin leads to punishment
    Punishment causes anger and depression
    And punishment is connected to judgment
    Judgment is made by filling gaps
    If the gap is unknown, assumption occurs
    So if the gap is unknown, who is to know?
    If no one knows than assumption becomes toxic
    And because it's toxic the story gets twisted
    It became twisted because we wanted answers
    Some answers were found under pressure
    Pressure is linked to quotas
    Under pressure we crack and become faulty
    Being faulty creates lies
    So to meet a quota to earn a paycheck
    Under pressure, becoming faulty
    Some have lied.
    Some of them are in the past
    The past creates a foundation
    That foundation also makes who we are today
    Who we are is linked to how we were taught
    How we are taught is linked to all I have stated
    All I have stated is quite true
    If it's all true then
    Then we've been taught on a foundation of lies
    That foundation of lies has caused a reaction
    That reaction has been taught
    So we've been taught to hate
    To steal, to assume, to lie
    To be depressed, to anger, be weak
    To cheat, to call names
    To destroy, to judge
    To pressure, to suffer
    To fear, to panic
    To forget whose really responsible
    To cover up, manipulate
    Someone had to say it was o.k.
    Someone had to say "o.k. under certain circumstances"
    And those circumstances has created one hell of a mess.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    ur were right it did touch me...its really good i love the way u right and ur outlook on the world
     
  3. jim kirby

    jim kirby Member

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    too much negativity and depression in one so young ... cheer up
     
  4. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    ehhh, I was just stating knowledge. I wasn't referring to myself in this one. But yes, I can be negative and depressing. It's kind of hard to cheer up when one has been traumatized so much throughout life with no pick me up's.
     
  5. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    i just found this one...its powerful i like it... it touched something in my soul
     
  6. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    wow, I'm glad I could do that.
     
  7. nynysuts

    nynysuts No Gods, No Masters

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    It makes my head spin, but i can really relate to it!
     
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