Nicu Babies, Nothing Short Of A Miracle

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hoperenefeese, Jul 13, 2007.

  1. hoperenefeese

    hoperenefeese Member

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    Nothing short of a miracle

    Nothing short of a mircale, has brought you in my arm's out of air
    nothing short of a blessing, has tore me down, to wound's and dressing's
    Nothing short of a call, has laid me next to you tonight
    Nothing short of a walk, has me on my feet all night

    Nothing short of a cry, is all i ask for in sight
    Nothing short of a sign, that everything will be alright

    Nothing short of a god, can bring you thru this fight
    nothing short of the lord, can make you strong, and bring you light.

    Nothing short of my prayer's, will bring to home alright
    Nothing short of all i have , is all worth having my precouis doll
     
  2. jim kirby

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    Interesting hope but do some proof reading and the spelling needs attention. having said that. who gives a toss about spelliing?
     
  3. The Instinct

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    hahah, spelling isn't all that important anyway when you release emotions...as long as your attempt to capture your feelings is what you are wanting and not someone else's I would think the job is complete. Accuracy of everything else comes in time. So if I can add my own line...Nothing short of open mindedness, can bring unity. I like this idea you have here, ever thought of taking it as far as you can go? A sequel? Just a thought.
     
  4. hoperenefeese

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    A sequel? Just a thought? what do you mean by that?
     
  5. The Instinct

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    a sequel meaning write another with the same idea. Just further the idea/thought until you are completely out of thought to continue. Just a thought meaning just my opinion.
     
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