this is a hard draft, so please excuse the spelling, thank you. What would i do in 48 hours? What would i do, in 48 hours? If 48 hours is all i had left? I can't think of nothing at the moment or even off the top of my head. But what would i do in 48 hours If in 48 hour's i would pass away Would i forgive all my enimes so i can pass to the other side with no delay? Who know's what i would do in 48 hours If 48 hour's is all i had Cause no one know's what 48 hours would bring until the shoe's of those hours, are the shoes they are in. What would i think about for 48 hours? if 48 hour's is all that remained? I would say "i love you" to my kid's and "i forgive you's" to all of my friend's When 48 hour's is apun you, and your 48 hour's is up You will leave with a sence of being You will be that angel who arose from the rut.
rewrite this and pay attention to your spelling ... i know its a first draft but you know what they say about first impressions ... the concept is good and if i had 48 hours left ... shit i'd get pissed.
I like the idea, and 48 hours or less is how most often I try to live my life. Enjoy the moment and the beauty and simply release and relax...is my thinking...at least right now...I'll find out in another 48 hours.
