how it feels to love you (uncertainty)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Jul 18, 2007.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    what it feels like to love you
    is like being in my own
    personal hell
    where im always thinking of you
    and i just cant get
    you out of my head
    but i know youre not thinking of me
    or are you
    i just dont know anymore

    loving you is hard
    you play with the inside of my mind
    laughing softly and teasing me
    youre hard to evict
    from my mind right now
    what i want is to hear your voice
    do you want to hear mine
    i dont think so
    but im not really too sure

    loving you is a mystery
    i dont think you love me
    even though i love you
    so fucking much
    but im really not sure
    youre teasing me without knowing it
    or do you know
    is it all on purpose
    i just cant tell with you
     
  2. children of korn

    children of korn Member

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    awesome poem, i really like it
     
  3. jim kirby

    jim kirby Member

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  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    i used to be able to play the guitar, but for some unknown reason my mother canceled them. i can sing though, im trying to make a band which keeps getting screwed up :( but its an effort anyway.
    thanks :)
     
  5. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    haha i love it...it reminds of EJ HAHAHAHA...but now i know i have someone that love me YAY!!!! CHICKEN I FREAKING LOVE YOU
     
  6. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    heyyyy, love you tooo!!! ej'sa fucker fuckface loserdude, johns cooler!!! i dont know him, but i do know anyone's cooler than ej!!! lololol,
     
  7. The Instinct

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    hell yeah, I know this feeling well, good job wording.
     
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