^^ lol, I woke up covered in dirt dye and cigerette ashes once writing all of this outter space crap in the back of moving truck cuz I was friggen ripped on white rhino and pcp... the words were more like heirogliphics than anything else, I think I was trying to write poetic segments in a new language or something. hahahaha
they were about you YouReminMe Of You ... in response to your post that i was annoying you by not posting all my stuff in one thread ... remember?????
Yea, I agree with redyelruc. i really like the petals poem. as for the roses are red ones, i just dont see much creativity. i hope im not sounding really mean or like anything cause im not trying to be but like roses are red violets are blue is like a given, you just make up two more lines with only 1 rhyming word. i don't know if you understand what im saying but whatever at least i know what im tryin to say but overall not bad.:H keep writin.
I totally get what you're trying to say. I don't write them often but I hadn't posted any of them yet so I just posted all of 'em together with my short poems.