Post-It Note Poems

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by YouRemindMeOfYou, Jul 20, 2007.

  1. Stubb0rnSt0n3r

    Stubb0rnSt0n3r Banned

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    ^^ lol, I woke up covered in dirt dye and cigerette ashes once writing all of this outter space crap in the back of moving truck cuz I was friggen ripped on white rhino and pcp...
    the words were more like heirogliphics than anything else, I think I was trying to write poetic segments in a new language or something. hahahaha
     
  2. jim kirby

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    they were about you YouReminMe Of You ... in response to your post that i was annoying you by not posting all my stuff in one thread ... remember?????
     
  3. sunshine_daydream07

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    Yea, I agree with redyelruc. i really like the petals poem.:)

    as for the roses are red ones, i just dont see much creativity. i hope im not sounding really mean or like anything cause im not trying to be:( but like roses are red violets are blue is like a given, you just make up two more lines with only 1 rhyming word. i don't know if you understand what im saying but whatever at least i know what im tryin to say:)

    but overall not bad.:H keep writin.
     
  4. YouRemindMeOfYou

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    Oh yeah...sorry. I get kinda out of it when I'm sick. Well...I loved 'em. They were very good.
     
  5. YouRemindMeOfYou

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    I totally get what you're trying to say. I don't write them often but I hadn't posted any of them yet so I just posted all of 'em together with my short poems.
     
  6. blackheartbitch

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    i really like this one. all of them were good
     
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