The Dreamer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Naoki_ninja, Jul 26, 2007.

  1. Naoki_ninja

    Naoki_ninja Bruce Lee's hero

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    Her scarlet cheek's glisten,
    is the rain's falling touch,
    when she dances under her umbrella

    Her amber eye's glitter,
    is the sun's brightest glow,
    when she dances under the leaves

    Her black hair's shimmer,
    is the midnight's cool breeze,
    wheb she dances under the starlight

    Her smile's sweet embrace,
    is the water's gentle caress,
    wheb she dances under the waterfall

    Her mind's soothing melody,
    is the song that she dances to,
    when she's lying under the blanket of her dreams.

    ~Danni
     
  2. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    NICE, What's her phone number? I like the sound of her. We can dance under waterfalls together.

    Peace,
    Aidan
     
  3. hippyhappy

    hippyhappy Member

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    That was beautiful, I liked it, I can really picture her freedom.
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    it forms a nice fuzzy picture in my mind of a happy person! :) Good poem!
     
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