A really really really old one that I wrote when...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Musikero, Jul 28, 2007.

  1. Musikero

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    this sucks dude ... "and my heart sighs a a thousand and one sighs." This will have them rolling in the aisles. Back to the drawing board for you.
     
    jim kirby, Jul 28, 2007
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    I know, I was such a corny kid back then. LOL :) Of course, it sounded much better when I sang it. Anyway, I just wanted to see what kind of writer I was at that time. I was too shy to show it to anyone so I had no way of knowing how good/bad it was.
     
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