changing: But what I'd really like to see is my dick in your mouth. to: But what I'd really like to see is my dick inside your mouth. would keep consistant pace for syllables.
Immaculate. If I ever get drugged, beaten and forced to marry someone.. you, sir, are writing the wedding vows.
LMAO! :lol: I'd like you to write the speech for the best man to say in my wedding. On second thought, the bride would probably kill you...
Ya from a girls perspective, is this what the insight into a guys mind is like?! Its witty. I love the romanticised lines at the start of the verse and then it gets down to what you really mean in animalistic terms. It was great! I liked it.
