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love absent from the aching heart

feelings of amputation wounds the soul
cut off from the world left in isolation

crying lakes of burning eyes

painfull seclusion haunts in the mind

self loathing greets us at the door
A plethora of rage laughing joyfully

 

Wow. Just...wow.

 

good wow or bad wow?

 

Wonderful, very deep and heart-felt; true talent you have! this ninja likey.

 

Good wow.

 

Really good one I think!

 

holy cow man, thats really good, but kind of a downer.

 

I need a name

 

"Inside My Tortured Soul"

"Welcome To My Tormented Mind"

"A Prisoner Of My Mind"

 

no i'm going to call it "A self cut off feeling of love"