friend zone

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Maundrell, Aug 3, 2007.

  1. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    wall of friendship blocks my heart
    smiles and hugs replace kisses and love
    wanting selfishly to cross this field
    clueless to the world that surrounds her
    oblivious freezing pain from her cold lack of touch
    imagining her in my arms sleeping
    hoping we may be together
     
  2. Naoki_ninja

    Naoki_ninja Bruce Lee's hero

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    oh, wow, i really liked it! you've got talent!~Danni
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Who can't relate to this..........?
    One way feelings, not being returned, or even acknowledged........
    Great piece.
     
  4. sublime94

    sublime94 Banned

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    that was touching. dude, you got some real talent, you should write a poem book. Id totally buy.
     
  5. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    i'm improvising most of them
     
  6. Malapascua

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    Then you're a natural..........
     
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