The Warrior

i hope that u like it , it's not that good but i'm surviving

I'm gone now …​

Let my pen talk instead of my heart​

He knows the pain ​

He knows the hurt​

And I know he's better than myself​

To tell the facts​

In the middle of the battle of life ​

A warrior was trying to survive​

He's not the bravest ​

But he got the soul ​

In a time which a little got ​

He grabbed his sword ​

To unknown fate ​

Taking stabs in every side of his ..​

Poor body of soul ​

His wands are getting worse​

And worse …​

He's bleeding ​

Like a sad eye ​

That cry ..and ​

Saying good bye ​

For the true love ​

Of her life ​

Knowing that ​

It won't come back ever again ​

The warrior stood up on his feet​

Forgetting every reason for this awful pain ​

Badly wanting to win​

But what happened then ​

Made his world spin ​

I know what you're thinkin'​

But No ..​

It's not the enemy who made him ​

Like a lonely thirsty flower dieing in vein ​

When the warrior opened his eyes ​

Before saying 4 this world goodbye ​

He wanted to look to this cruel heart's eye ​

A moment of silence …..​

… Couldn't have the ability to say a word ​

Just wishing that he left ​

Before that last look ​

To that eye ​

The eye of his true love …​

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first floor plz


i want some comments pls ( if u want )

 

An interesting piece Hope,
Enjoyed

 

Very nice.

 

fascinating, outstanding. I like it.

 

thank u all 4 ur sweet words ^^ it will realy effect on me in my deep heart


& i promise the next poams will b alot better