The Warrior

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Hope_B, Jul 29, 2007.

  1. Hope_B

    Hope_B Member

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    i hope that u like it , it's not that good but i'm surviving :p

    I'm gone now …

    Let my pen talk instead of my heart

    He knows the pain

    He knows the hurt

    And I know he's better than myself

    To tell the facts

    In the middle of the battle of life

    A warrior was trying to survive

    He's not the bravest

    But he got the soul

    In a time which a little got

    He grabbed his sword

    To unknown fate

    Taking stabs in every side of his ..

    Poor body of soul

    His wands are getting worse

    And worse …

    He's bleeding

    Like a sad eye

    That cry ..and

    Saying good bye

    For the true love

    Of her life

    Knowing that

    It won't come back ever again

    The warrior stood up on his feet

    Forgetting every reason for this awful pain

    Badly wanting to win

    But what happened then

    Made his world spin

    I know what you're thinkin'

    But No ..

    It's not the enemy who made him

    Like a lonely thirsty flower dieing in vein

    When the warrior opened his eyes

    Before saying 4 this world goodbye

    He wanted to look to this cruel heart's eye

    A moment of silence …..

    … Couldn't have the ability to say a word

    Just wishing that he left

    Before that last look

    To that eye

    The eye of his true love …



     
  2. Hope_B

    Hope_B Member

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    first floor plz :p


    i want some comments pls ( if u want ;) )
     
  3. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    An interesting piece Hope,
    Enjoyed:)
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Very nice.
     
  5. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    fascinating, outstanding. I like it.
     
  6. Hope_B

    Hope_B Member

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    thank u all 4 ur sweet words ^^ it will realy effect on me in my deep heart


    & i promise the next poams will b alot better
     

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