i hope that u like it , it's not that good but i'm surviving I'm gone now … Let my pen talk instead of my heart He knows the pain He knows the hurt And I know he's better than myself To tell the facts In the middle of the battle of life A warrior was trying to survive He's not the bravest But he got the soul In a time which a little got He grabbed his sword To unknown fate Taking stabs in every side of his .. Poor body of soul His wands are getting worse And worse … He's bleeding Like a sad eye That cry ..and Saying good bye For the true love Of her life Knowing that It won't come back ever again The warrior stood up on his feet Forgetting every reason for this awful pain Badly wanting to win But what happened then Made his world spin I know what you're thinkin' But No .. It's not the enemy who made him Like a lonely thirsty flower dieing in vein When the warrior opened his eyes Before saying 4 this world goodbye He wanted to look to this cruel heart's eye A moment of silence ….. … Couldn't have the ability to say a word Just wishing that he left Before that last look To that eye The eye of his true love …
thank u all 4 ur sweet words ^^ it will realy effect on me in my deep heart & i promise the next poams will b alot better