dont be so quick to judge others. who cares if they were raised by two mothers who cares if they have to many lovers and who cares what they do under covers. who cares if they choose to never eat who cares if fat covers their feet who cares if they look parcially insane and who cares if what they wear is just lame. why worry about what they choose to believe why worry if its non-sence they heave if enlightenment is their wish to achive dont be rude and get up and leave. just respect the actions people make dont throw your dumb darts of hate because when you throw those darts at their hearts it slowy tears me apart. it slowy enrages my mind dont treat people so fucking unkind dont treat people so fucking rude it puts everyone in a bad mood it put everyone in a bad place just slow down your pace pf hate and chill out... your vision of reality needs a tighter grip im sick of all the bum trips.... what do you think?
It seems kind of like a list with a jagged flow to it, but I actually like that aspect a lot. I'm not a big fan of forced rhyming either, but I think in this rare case, I can appreciate both aspects because that was a damn awesome poem Keep up the good work!
big fan of forced rhyming haha i tend to do that a little and i dont mean to lol "a list with a jagged flow" lol i appreciate everything u just told me
