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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The Instinct, Jul 27, 2007.

  1. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    I tried writing something different with this. See if you can tell what I did. All comments/replies welcome.

    I must change the way
    I must find better endings
    I must continue to find new and better beginnings
    I must find a way to carve a new route
    It's hard to break a cycle that's been engraved

    The choices I will make will be better
    It should set me on an easier path
    Where is the flow I need to find?
    Knowing the choices I've made haunt me

    Granted, things could be a lot better
    Granted, things could be much worse

    In the grand scheme is it worth it?
    When things are bad how do you redirect?

    Sometimes I feel like my life is a bad hand
    Sometimes I'm too depressed to write my feelings
    The pace of my day changes slowly
    The pace of my day changes quickly

    The pace of my day changes...

    Sometimes I'm too depressed to write my feelings
    Sometimes I feel like my life is a bad hand
    When things are bad how do you redirect?
    In the grand scheme is it worth it?

    Granted, things could be much worse
    Granted, things could be a lot better

    Knowing the choices I've made haunt me
    Where is the flow I need to find?
    It should set me on an easier path
    The choices I will make will be better

    It's hard to break a cycle that's been engraved
    I must find a way to carve a new route
    I must continue to find new and better beginnings
    I must find better endings
    I must change the way

    c. 2007
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    yeah, thats awesome :)
     
  4. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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  5. Hope_B

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    it's realy nice i felt it deep inside
     

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