It hurts me Love is kinda like A little hell They say love is a roller coaster No it's not Roller coasters are fun This isn't The ups and downs You love me You hate me You're with me You're with her and me You're with her And I'm alone And you're not Why are you calling me Go call your girlfriend What's this shit, You still want me But it's her you love It's just she lives so far away Well fuck it I don't care how far she is Stop tearing me apart With your calls And your kisses And your looks I ignored your call So don't text me either And don't come to my house Every time I see you Hear your voice See your name It's like being stabbed In the heart And no, you don't love me And I don't care If you want me in bed with you You're hurting me And I want it to stop Love hurts
Aww! That's such a depressing poem. Do you write happy stuff too? I like your style, so I'd be glad to hear it if you did
Freaky, another good piece. You have found so many ways to poeticly descride being cheated on, being dumped, being played, and having a trust destroyed. I hope things are better for you soon. And I too would love to see some of your happier work.
I can try to write happier stuff, I suppose...I've been told it doesn't turn out as good but I'll post some of my happier stuff...
Nice one FMC, I seem to making a habit of picking out a line or two that I really like.. Or you seem to have a knack at writing a line or two that I really like.. Whatever it is, I fucking love this line. Keep up the good work. By the way, I would be interested in reading some happier poems of yours too. Peace, Aidan
Being an artist includes getting to know all the colors on the panel! I always enjoy a work from you.
