haha this one has many good and bad memories attatch to it. freakymetalchik u shuld remember parts of it but im editing it a bit. its one of my older peices so its not as put together as some of my newer things even after changing it around a bit. comments and critisism welcomed... Screaming into the eternal fires that escape my mind and grab hold of my insides vomit is all that's left of my party charade the good times have disapeared into the night. I've lost my willpower to a desperate soul one that held me like he loved me falsly and in a strange and unfimilair way but the truth came out my love wasn't enough so im left soulless. I can't fine solid ground to lay my fucking head to stop the spinning of the world and the crashing of the life i led the happiness consumed by depression. I want someone to hold my hand not my breast I want someone to kiss my forehead not my neck I want the sweet affection of real love.
Ahhh I remember this! Didn't you put that together and we gave it to him to read? Or was that a different one? Either way it's good!
yea it was this one lol and then he got pissed off and screamed at me and then didnt talk to me for a week...lol thats wen tre groped me in the middle of the hallway lol
"I want someone to hold my hand not my breast I want someone to kiss my forehead not my neck I want the sweet affection of real love." :applause:
