Fukkin' Wordz.........

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by just_poetic, Aug 8, 2007.

  1. just_poetic

    just_poetic Member

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    i want u to.....
    penetrate me
    fukk me wit ur wordz
    hit me off wit that lyrical dick
    ur wordz stick and move then move and stick
    oooh shit!!!!
    i can feel ur prose brush across my clit
    the sound of ur voice gets me moist
    so much that i have no choice
    but to bust a poetic nut....feel me?
    ur wordz explore my body like hands
    why do u have this effect on me man
    throwin endless thrusts of nouns and verbs
    and ur metephorically gifted, ya heard?
    i def know u like how this is soundin
    lay ur lyrics across my body and start poundin
    turn me over and let ur wordz hit me from the back
    and then we'll both poetically climax..............


    these are fukkin wordz
    speak 2 me
     
  2. pocketmouse014

    pocketmouse014 Member

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    omg i love it!!!!
    haha
    brillant lol
    "but to bust a poetic nut....feel me?"
    awesome!
     
  3. just_poetic

    just_poetic Member

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    glad u liked it................keep readin...i got some crazy ones..............thanx for tha feed
     
  4. Stubb0rnSt0n3r

    Stubb0rnSt0n3r Banned

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    Yikes, and how long has this been going on? Word?
     
  5. shobs

    shobs Member

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    hey ill penetrate u
     
  6. ReadyForAction

    ReadyForAction Member

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    I'd probably do you too, as long as you can spell, and capitalize proper nouns. Yeah but no, this poem is way fucking intense.
     
  7. Musikero

    Musikero Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    "hit me off wit that lyrical dick..." lol;)
     
  8. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    I find ur writin an spellz a bit annoyin but I REALLY DIG THIS FUCKING POEM.

    IT IS GREAT. SUPERB. DIRTY. EROTIC. HORNY.

    Keep posting please,
    Aidan
     
  9. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Although I find her writing style challenging at times, it is just that. Her style.
    And it really makes some of the poems unique.

    She has a different style than we are used to seeing here, and I enjoy it.

    As for the 15 and 17 year old that want to "do" her, I think she would hurt you.
    She sounds very worldly. And at 33, she is probably in her prime.
     
  10. Musikero

    Musikero Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    just_poetic: you're making me think dirty thoughts, you naughty girl... :X

    Malapascua: :agree:
     
  11. lakeoffire

    lakeoffire Live.Laugh.Fuck.

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    thats jus straight illl
     
  12. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    Oh My! Be still my adverb:drool:
     

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