your gone

i was going out with a guy, we spent the night together b4 he left for the army and i wrote this....

oh what a fantastic day of life
of what a marvalous life of day
oh last night, what can i say?
i never ever felt that way
and i mean it, this time i will not play.
together from night to day
we spent
forever ill remember the way
everything took place
no frown on my face
no feel of disgrace
im sore
in one place
but its a good type of sore.
no bore
no gore....
...
no more... ill see you
im sad.. ill miss you.
and i miss you.
very very very much.
ive only just left your soft caring loving touch
just a mere few hours ago.
although
it feels ilke ages
the wages of time are going to get me
while you leave me.

 

I like it! It seems surreal, kind of like a dream...was that intentional, or did it just kind of turn out that way? Or am I wrong?

 

kind of like a dream.. hmm haha
it just kinda came out that way lol i was in a little bit of a happy dream state at the time haha

 

Cool......
Did the guy come back yet?
(you didn't say when he left)

 

i like it

 

no he just left

 

Ya beautiful

 

its beautiful

 

thanks so much
it really means a lot to me lol

 

ur a love poem writer.........................cute drop

 

love poem writer, sometimes
it just depends whats going on lol