Child Abuse Poem....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by greengoddess, May 9, 2006.

  1. greengoddess

    greengoddess Nature Freak!

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    Her name is Auroura
    She was only five
    This is what happened
    When she was alive


    Her dad was a drunk
    Her mom was an addict
    Her parents kept her
    Locked in an attic


    Her only friend
    was a little toy bear
    It was old and worn out
    And had patches of hair


    She always talked to it
    When no one's around
    She lays there and hugs it
    Not a peep of sound


    Until her parents
    unlock the door
    Some more and more pain
    She'll have to endore


    A bruise on her leg
    A scar on her face
    Why would she be
    In such a horrible place?


    But she grabs her bear
    And softly crys
    She loves her parents
    But they want her to die


    She sits in the corner
    Quiet but thinking,
    " God, why? Why is
    My life always sinking? "


    Such a bad life
    For a sad little kid
    She'd get beaten and beaten
    For anything she did


    Then one night
    Her mom came home high
    The poor child was hit and slapped
    As hours went by


    Then her mom suddenly
    Grabbed for a blade
    It was sharp and pointy
    One that she made


    She thrusted the blade
    Right in her chest,
    " You deserve to die
    You worthless pest! "


    The mom walked out
    Leaving the girl slowly dying
    She grabbed her bear
    And again started crying


    Police showed up
    At the small little house
    The quickly barged in
    Everything was as quiet as a mouse


    One officer slowly
    Opened a door
    To find the sad little girl
    Lying on the floor


    It must have been bad
    To go through so much harm
    But at least she died
    With her best friend in her arms

    unknown... I saw this on myspace and thought I'd share..
    children are constantly dying from child abuse.. this is just so sad..
     
  2. AerialReaver

    AerialReaver Member

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    whoa...I don't know what to say. Very sad.
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Wow, I went back 100 pages looking through some older posts, and I am glad I did.
    This is very sad, and like greengoddess, I thought I would share.
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Wow this is good
     
  5. sublime94

    sublime94 Banned

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    dude, I love poetry, and this is great, in a morbid sense, but why do poets always focus on that which is unhappy? And thats like all you guys do these days. What is the unhappy with out the happy? Why not write of that which is good?
     
  6. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    i love it.

    sublime94 many poets write what they feel and to express many expriences they have had...some are happy, some are sad, some are gory...depending on who the poet is and their unique style of writing then you cant really say that all poets write about sad things. Yes many of my poems are sad and depressing but ive written some filled with happy memories and love...so seriously dont be so quick to judge.
     
  7. Musikero

    Musikero Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    My God. I can understand parents being pissed off at their kid, but treating a little girl like that...

    This poem made me angry and sad.
     
  8. pocketmouse014

    pocketmouse014 Member

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    beautifully said
     
  9. just_poetic

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    this is a poem so full of emotion that it made me cry..........................beautifully written
     
  10. ReadyForAction

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    Man, mice are pretty loud.
     
  11. Skratch

    Skratch Member

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    wow...
    I'm in love with that poem
    some kids are just born into shit and never escape

    fuck this place
     
  12. dezmondzpipe

    dezmondzpipe Member

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    this is pretty awesome it reminds me of something edward gorey would illustrate...if you don't know who edward gorey is check it out!
     
  13. Stubb0rnSt0n3r

    Stubb0rnSt0n3r Banned

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    Sentiments I know all to well. Life can be sad.

    But the whole morph-freak locked in the bell tower cliche...
    For some reason has a good line of always fittng somewhere into society.
    Humans will never stop needing to realize conscience.

    And thanks for bringing that here. I've read many like it, near tear experiences.
     
  14. ReadyForAction

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    Oh come on now. You can't have the sweet without the sour, life would be boring without suffering. Ying and Yang?
     
  15. Stubb0rnSt0n3r

    Stubb0rnSt0n3r Banned

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    hahaha ying hahaha
    ok she had a bear, that's a start...
    Momma and pappa, they had a hell they didn't know how to react to. So on that note, who suffered more?
    But that's getting into the grinder, and the poem is fine as is.
     
  16. Malapascua

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    Read my poem "coffee time". That is light-hearted. [​IMG]
     
  17. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    In some people's lives, there's not a lot of happy stuff to write about.
     

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