deserted

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Maundrell, Aug 8, 2007.

  1. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    This place I want to be
    is the place I cannot reach.
    Fumbling through the heat
    over this endless beach.
    I can't go on
    wondering if I'm going to survive
    these rays of death feeling least alive.
    Seeing a mirage of water past the dunes,
    hallucinations foresee my doom.
    Soon I will cease to be,
    vultures hovering over me,
    falling to my knees,
    breathing heavily,
    giving up ever so slowly.
    Last word spoken "help ..."
     
  2. Malapascua

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    Cool.
    I hope I never find myself in that position.
    Is this a metaphore for a really bad relationship?
     
  3. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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