Nemesis: Sunsets assumed the shape of love encased in cocoons, crescent moons, consumed thoughts and allowed them to bloom, within this midst we arose, juxtaposed and unclothed, eternities prose perched on time as it froze, - and here we are members of a moment that's been captured, similar to your gaze and your rapture I need - to be freed, the seed has already been planted, past loves recanted, the breezes have chanted Poetic: I'm weak wheneva i look into ur eyes i reminisce of humid nights an' starry skies everything abruptly stops....only we remain physically entwinned as we make love in tha rain i feel ur need....release daddy an' be freed u planted it now i'll carry ur seed surround me as i melt into ur loves abyss listen to those breezes chant as i receive ur kiss....... Nemesis: It's been a century, in three moons, i'm thinking this is meant to be bliss as sand breaking sea-because i'm sure a sun'll bloom our seed all eternity's our vacancy you're that one smile timeless...time is my sundial and..seconds are spacious when my hand and your face touch so gracious your embrace.. just.. encase your daydream in my gaze and i sense the world aging suspense in grazing-when you tremble i find it amazing, how our thoughts assemble and further ranging on from the strange seems arranged as stencil paintings but we're bathing in pastel showers, past the hour of daisies opaque flowers in light fading-invites dating-to bright colors.. under night covers no need for umbrellas, i bleed into rubbers the speed of me smuthers as i repeatingly love thrust careful the shade don't run-and i don't rush before i know you've brung sunshine on my sprung mind confined in your undying extasy while i long next to be...sexed by thee insulin in the hex I.V. you got me sinking in a copy jot by me-of your soul sketch soulstress deep as wonder in hell under your spell-i wish to soak in a whole stretch of photos in as internal you dwell Poetic:: If i could roll u an' smoke u, i'd toke u an' provoke u to take advantage of my disadvantages....heal me...... make ur love my bandages wrap me in tha words that u manipulate into sexual innuendos that cause me to masturbate my words an' climax into a seductive flow in a language only u would know wit oooooohhhh's and aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh's an' daddy yesses ur words heatin' my skin wit gentle caresses damn, u got me stuck................. u affect me in a crazy style i can't see it but i feel ur smile i feel it when tha sun shines my eyes blind to anyone else but u...u see how u do u....got.....me.........OPEN Nemesis: shift these walls in when zoning-into-your eyelids.. i used to sit silent hearing the hiss of the brisk spheres jeering a lisp violin peering split dears that sit here.. fable breaking through wits which influenced my handle of denial that a table, candle fire ..and we.. on the nile..can inspire any to smile.. glorious days of sun rays and so we bask in sunshine thoughts, forget-me-nots memories of the lot where your love was first sought the power of "our" - the lust for "us" - the memories of "we" lets not be blind in the mind to what our souls see somewhere emotions collide, and where light is shone we reside beyond high tides, where the sun and the moon divide and with pride defied, I yearn to reach this horizon, love disguised in the guise of your eyes and -, its relevant - you keep me out of my element in tune with body and mind where I was soul resident becoming evident that your mind is with mine, relationship divine defined when the stars were aligned, eternities time assigned we unite in loves light, and shine bright in nights, in-spite of lover's plights hearts swell, and souls delve deeper in loves well so steep in your occurrence I've fell damn.......... right? me and my homeboy nemesis wrote this together............
First impressions, I like it. Like all longish pieces that I like here, I will print it out and mull over it slowly. I will get back to you. Keep writing, Peace, Aidan
So THAT's how you did it! I was wondering how you were able to write two distinct personalities into your poem. I liked it. I found it very *ahem* stimulating.
i liked it. both personalities make it complete...ur sexual style and his sensual style compliment each other to the point of perfection. when reading it i just wanted it to keep going on
