How I feel

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Aug 9, 2007.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Sometimes I feel...
    Like no one cares
    And I'm alone
    No one's around to bring me
    Up from this depression
    Fuck the world
    And slit my wrists
    And laugh

    Sometimes I feel...
    Like I have two sides
    Dark and darker
    There's no light where I am
    And no one will care
    When I die meaninglessly
    No funeral
    For me

    Sometimes I feel...
    Like life is a hole
    And I can't get out
    Of the darkness
    Trapped inside
    No one to help
    No one to rescue me
    Lonely forever

    Have you ever felt this way
    How I feel
    Trapped inside without a light
    With no one
    The darkness choking me
    Feeling like
    I'll be this way
    Forever
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    yes. i love it. id care if u died id be sad forever :(
     
  3. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    But freaky we love you, no need to feel dark, when you share your light with us.
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Aww thanks guys! :)
     
  5. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    Your very welcome freaky hun :grouphug:
     
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  7. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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  8. Gothika

    Gothika Member

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    As usual, nice poem!
     
  9. Skratch

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    I like it

    fuck the world
    I'm comfortable in my hole
     
  10. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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