Rising steel from rivers edge

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ReadyForAction, Aug 8, 2007.

  1. ReadyForAction

    ReadyForAction Member

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    This is pretty heavy so watch out!

    Paint the moon a shade of teal
    Over valleys under trees
    Tarnish scattered on the beach
    Leaves caress the naked ground
    Trillium paths with bareback stumps
    Sunrise mountain so pristine
    Foothills, summer on the way
    A king is tucked beneath a stream
    Cities far from all thatÕs real

    Villagers begin to gather
    Tolling bell calls to prayer
    Voices last night whispered death
    Consensus bring our fighting chance
    Feasting madly on hollow bone
    No food to fight for what is right
    Out of the forest came raining light

    All of the sudden a sound so brusque
    Owl waking curious commotion
    Walking souls in hiding place
    The wind is gone with no refrain
    Singing halts it came no more

    One more time a cry is raised
    Several weapons pierce the dark
    Mystery is what to strike
    One more fight to have it done
    Powers strong and force is fierce
    One man to raise a golden stake
    Drive heart where darkness thrives

    Starlight guide a path to right
    Three men of glory all are left
    Fight the last one to the death
    Have no balance nor fear within
    Messiah lies in manger hay

    Fame and fortune on the mind
    Destroy the art burn the books
    Back to basics itÕs to late
    Fires rage evil prevails
    Kill to relieve to teach the truth



    Over the hills and far away
    Do not hide away
    Hide behind your peace and love
    Everyone knows whatÕs to be said

    Parade around your colored hair
    That boy there up on the cross
    The Son of God hath no hold
    Rising steel from rivers edge
     
  2. just_poetic

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    wow...........this is really deep........what en excellently written piece.................i love to read poetry like this, so different from my style of writing...................nice drop
     
  3. pocketmouse014

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    parade around your colored hair
     
  4. shobs

    shobs Member

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    damn dude, ur probly the best poet on the forum
     
  5. blackheartbitch

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    wow...really deep...i loved it.
     
  6. children of korn

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    this poem is really deep. its beautiful.
     

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