pick a title

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Maundrell, Aug 10, 2007.

  1. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    shears of tarred glass raining

    gilbert godfrey plays the trumpet on TV
    light flashes past my eye
    humble pie like grandma used to bake

    conscious trees sigh at the night sky

    loving dogs roam the hills, starving.
    An ancient dried up lake wanting to drink

    today, yesterday, tommorow forever
    gone, gone wild, gone buck wild

    waving goodbye beneath us
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Sounds like some depressed person turned on the TV and saw Gilbert Godfrey, and that was the last straw, and they took their own life.
    As they lay dieing, they reflected about the sights and sounds around their house, out in the country.

    I pick "The Last Straw" as a title.
     
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