Natures grip on change

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Aug 13, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

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    been writing a lot about changing the world and making it a better place. heres another example. all comments/critiques welcome.



    NATURES GRIP ON CHANGE

    hot thick air sticking to my lungs
    catching the life holding it in
    the hands of mother nature
    its entirely her decision to crush
    me or to let me make my peace
    for every creature upon her surface
    and controlled by her strong hands
    a sweet vision of my future of the
    worlds future because of my near
    death expirence...GASP!!!!
    The air fills my lungs agian as
    I slide to the floor I suddenly
    know my purpose the reason for my heart
    to beat I'm the single person who'll
    move the world to change and
    many will my cries onto leaders
    deaf ears.
     
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