Liquor and Heartbreak

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by wave owls not flags, Aug 20, 2007.

  1. wave owls not flags

    wave owls not flags is not interested

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    Liquor and heartbreak
    aint mixin anymore
    but I guess that's what i get
    for lovin a whore

    I shoulda known better after
    she left my friend
    but knowin what I know
    I'd do it all again

    I'm gettin more love from this drink
    than I ever got from her
    and just like her it seemed like a good idea
    but now I'm not so sure

    And I'm learnin that
    liquor and heartbreak just don't mix
    cause i got both in me right now
    and I'm feelin mighty sick

    but drinkin's the only thing that
    feels right right now
    so ima keep drinkin
    til i forget what i'm drinkin about




    Copyright 2007 Chuck Hall
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    WOW,
    At 19, you shouldn't have been subjected to such heartache yet.

    Shit, it's a great piece of work.

    That's my opinion.
     
  3. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    this is great. im sorry u had to live through that...but all of us must...even i only being 15 has experienced that...but i wasnt drinking popping pills is more my thing.
     
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