Smoking Skies

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Swinging-Hippie, Sep 5, 2007.

  1. Swinging-Hippie

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    Smoking Skies



    The smoking skies above, they whisper something.
    Giving the trees something to breath.
    The river who is close to me, is so cold.
    I reach it gently with the palm of my hand.
    And suddenly I see your reflection, slowly fading away.

    So purely that I almost can't take it.
    My heart is beating, fast.
    As I fall into your fading reflection.
    Water is surrounding me, in it's most purest form.

    Taking me away from, me
    I can't breath, but I do not mind.
    Am I dead already?

    I don't know.

    We are one now, finally together,
    after such a lonely time, being all alone.

    Where will we go? Heaven?

    Does it matter?
    I say no
    I can tell, you feel the same

    Because the smoking skies above us, stopped whispering.





    Wow a poetry forum, and i didn't now that.. jebus​
    it's kinda weird to post my work, since your feeling so exposed..​
    this piece is from 2004, and it really feels like ages since i wrote this​
     

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