New Poem I Wrote

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by VolcomStoner420, Sep 5, 2007.

  1. VolcomStoner420

    VolcomStoner420 Member

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    Looking around for something worthwile,
    so I pick up this pencil and begin to defile.

    There is nothing else that I could do,
    for it would've been done, ten times through.

    I guess what I'm saying is that I need something,
    to help gaze at the future and see what's coming.

    With life so random, you can die anyday,
    Is it any wonder why I sit here and stay?

    You "high-divers" dive from the rockiest cliffs
    then you crash into a never ending pit.
    Fuck all that shit, I'll be enjoying some spliffs.
     
  2. RiversClearwater

    RiversClearwater Member

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    sigh, the monotony of life...I feel ya, if I interpret correctly...
     
  3. Two Strange Eyes

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  4. Malapascua

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    I felt it was all over the place, but the last verse brought it together.
     
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