No Words Can Do It

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LadyPsycho!, Sep 6, 2007.

  1. LadyPsycho!

    LadyPsycho! Member

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    Everyday this shit gets harder

    Trying to let go,

    But my grasp gets tighter.

    My emotions & thoughts stay bottled

    Inside this beautiful body.

    On the outside yes there is beauty

    But on the inside there is so much more!

    A combination of love, hate, confusion, couriosity,...

    The list goes on and on.

    Everyday I'm forced to live with these thoughts and questions

    With no explanation, no answers and I'm left feeling hopeless.

    Every blue moon I am able to distract my mind,

    Or I let my mind be distracted,

    Let myself feel this false sense of security.

    This is the bliss I once loved.

    As time goes on this starts to fade

    And reality hits, I'm back

    Here with all my thoughts and all my emotions.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Good poem. I like it a lot.

    Peace and love
     
  3. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    I have a feeling this is the beginning of many good poems.
     
  4. Watermellowny

    Watermellowny Member

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    i know what you mean... i feel like that too, therefore i must love this poem
     
  5. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    I love it. Can't wait to hear more from you.
     

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