found this site randomly and thought i'd share a few thoughts. I'm not a writer but sometimes feel the need to, its a strange mindset I sometimes find myself in. --All dreams cease when tomorrow disappears He lies and waits Drifts into dreams ‘don’t worry’ she says ‘I’m waiting’ ‘don’t frown, I’m waiting’ She moves, she’s cold She’s closer ‘don’t worry my love, I’m coming’ She’s warm when near, he smiles and says ‘don’t worry my love, been waiting’ He’s cold, but, She softly smiles and pulls him close ‘don’t worry my love, you’re here’ ‘its over’ I was reading a neil gaiman book and thinking of the sandman graphic novels and how death might be - tra la la I wrote some song lyrics too, but forgot the chords, its based around D A and G --When the mute screams we had no voice had no voice and had no choice all they could define from our silent speach was our poisened minds nobody would play with us nobody we knew could scream or shout enough though we tried we tried to live our silent lives we had to hide behind shattered dreams and wounded pride nobody was mad enough nobody we knew would play those games with us --- anyway, looks like a nice site, will take a good look round - just thought i'd share some of my thoughts at the moment cheers
Hello, incomplete.. I'd say welcome, but I'm just as new as you. Your style in the first piece almost seems like a graphic novel, would go well accompanied by blocks of illustration. Keep writing.. you'll find your niche, whether it's music, graphic novels, poetry, etc...
