Uncomfortable Silence

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Kether, Sep 12, 2007.

  1. Kether

    Kether Member

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    Let not my Will by this world be broken;
    There is beauty to be found in man's words,
    But it lived before the first words spoken,
    And is found more still in the song of birds,
    In the gentle flutterings of butterflys,
    And their graceful dancings amongst flowers,
    In the tender soft moth-breath of babies sighs,
    In the Elysian fields of stilled hours.
    Let me enjoy Silence's perfection,
    Protect me from those who cannot just exist
    And view Silence as needing correction,
    If needs be, I'd be alone, in it's midst.
    Sole uncomfortable one can befall,
    Is the Silence, by other's, cut too small.
     
  2. RiversClearwater

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    Wonderful, I love the simplicity of the message you write, and it is oh so true
     
  3. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Your description of silence is totally Comfortable! Very nice, thanks! Vetty
     
  4. saffronfrancisburnet

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    hi
    this is very lovely
    so calm yet i feel an urge to scream to let go
    and be free of a madness that this world
    creates....the loneliness but needing to be connected
    to the world....

    again great words here i enjoyed reading this poem..
    lovenpeace from saff.
     
  5. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Yes, nice job. Well done.
     
  6. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Nice poem. Nice words. Nice sentiments. Nice job.

    Peace,
    A.
     
  7. Kether

    Kether Member

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    Well! I came on again here today to post this, forgetting I had done so already, and discovered myself to be already logged in. Confused, then this!...five responses to a poem I forgot posting, and not a sour one amongst the bunch! Well, that's glory for you, and unlike Humpty, when I say glory, I mean "That's a surprising but pleasant turn of events". That's nice to awake to.

    Might I just add, RiversClearwater, that is one fine & marvellous beard! I'd love to grow a beard, but alas, a week of non-shaving, and parents & friends alike complain, and that's only at the appearance of stubble. Well-grown, and well-worn to you is all I have to say!
     
  8. Lady of the Freaks

    Lady of the Freaks Senior Member

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    that's a pic of jim morrison.
     
  9. Kether

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    Well, I stand corrected & sit down embarassed. The sentiment remains though...it takes a man with a beard, spiritual though it may be and not existing physically, to post such a picture as a signature. If only my beard, spiritual or physical, were as shaggily well-kempt!
     
  10. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    Sometimes the simplest message rings closest to the truth. Nice job. :)
     
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