Nice poem. Reads well. Actually sound like it could be the guy talking. It is a pretty negative opinion of an immigrant's opinion though, isn't it?
Yes, I suppose it is. But faced with what they have to endure in their home country, I imagine most truely want to work for a living, and make a difference for the family they bring with them, and the family they left behind. However, there are a few, that have darker goals. Just have a look around southern Cal. The poem is not my onion, it is my attempt at a two sided, artistic, view of one of todays real American problems. Thanks for your kind words, and your question.