Alone in a world of followers

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Sep 15, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    as always all comments and critisism welcomed

    Alone in a world full of followers

    I cannot stand the beating of my own heart;
    with every breath, the pain grows more unbearable.

    It will not subside and the clouds in my mind will not clear.
    The blackness consuming my heart will not change;
    the evil in my soul will not leave.


    The thoughts in my head are going to fuck the world up.
    I am a corrupt being who will change everything
    if only given the chance.
    I will make the world something better;
    believe in me and I will change your perception of believing.
    I do not claim to be a god
    I know I am just a worthless mortal.


    I need someone who cares and will be there

    as I try to show the world its deceit.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Nice poetry. Very dark though. I like it!

    Peace and love
     
  3. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    ^ thanks hippiechick
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    nice.
    i hate followers.
     
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