Ok, I decided to start a thread to keep all of my new poems under, so I dont flood the forum with my unwelcomed nonsense :tongue: - Snowflakes - topical anesthetic powder white cosmetic shine sodium fluoride salty cut hydrochloride kerosene solvent sodium bicarbonate soda fizz bubble ammonia insufflation first burn calm soothe fragrant stimulate nervous flow stimuli response fraction of a second blurry mind fuzz drip dry 3rd eye blinks thrice over bloodshot time crystalline tropane alkaloid is the worst high sum sum up the lies shakey hands dropped eyes frozen medicine anesthesia smoke too much bump bump delerious amnesia topical anesthetic powder white cosmetic shine sodium fluoride shiney shiney shiney
- Bliss - I had been been sitting sitting there for a while with my peaceful thoughts when backwards backward imagination poured in like a thick storm growing from the horizon on the ocean What is it like? Well, its funny that you ask + Thats when the hotel melts into the velvet carpet street and on waves of happiness she rode in Picked me up and I never came back
- Moon Water - just try, just a little bit harder didnt we all know a science is smarter? give it up to the wonderers gazing up to the stars lost in space time transition setting foot on ancient Mars magic man, oh magic man what's that rock inside your hand? its a little power pearl given to me by a little girl with wings and pointy ears buzzing while she hovers the tall grass swampy reeds holding the pearl to the moon brings floods of healing waters just try, just a little bit harder didnt we all know a science is smarter? we both see the same sun reflected on the same river let me walk east and you can walk the west and still the same sun follows so is there in fact two suns or is it still the same one holding the pearl to the moon brings floods of healing waters
I dont think your nonsense is unwelcomed or nonsense :tongue: Well Bliss I've read before and you know I love it and its one of my favorites (I keep adding new ones to the list). Snowflakes feels known and unknown at the same time, you know? Like an imagined memory.
- Capsulated Embryonic Medicine - OM TAT SAT Life is like a movie strange as it may seem material substance is the show empty space is the screen All genres are our moods illumined saints the director atomic structure is the film and God is the projector But who then, is the Holy Spirit the Om, the Tao, the Way? The light, between Us & Them which puts us on display Certain souls who practice yoga unattached to the maya screen sitting in the audience talk about their favorite scence : Row row row your boat gently down the stream merrily merrily merrily merrily life is but a dream
- When The Flowers Decayed - Sitting on the broken curb like we always used to O Bright Eyes Child where did the time go? Memories like splintered sunlite penetrate the empty void obscured by rain clouds my fluid conciousness remember when I plucked the Desert Rose from sand? you stood out like a city she moves me like a freight train something stirring under silence emotions are make believe such as a rabbit with horns feeling grew but a source sour what go up and then fall down melancholy stings my bones sitting on the broken curb like we always used to the Sun burned out and now its cold Love once bloomed but that too grew old
relayer, i love your poetry. i'd read a few of your poems before i'd signed up to the forums, you have a really unique writing style imo. bliss and moon water are my favourites. inspired me to go and have another write. X
Thank you little ski! I am very appreciative of your style as well, I think we have such a great mix of personalities and styles here and I love getting to know as much as I can about everyone
Wow this is wonderful. Its such a deep insight to changes we dread, but happen anyway. excellent work
Yeah Snowflakes made me think about cocaine :tongue: but made me think about other people too. John when the flowers decayed made me feel such a beautiful sadness, like nostalgia and well melancholy too, that's exactly what it makes me feel.
No problems. i agree, im really enjoying being on the forums, reading all of the work here is inspiring to write more poetry and improve.
hahaha yeah!! I feel the same. I love it when I get inspired by others, it's the most fun chain reaction. We can paint the world with words
can I say that I love your nick? little ski it's so cute. I mean the sky is pretty but a LITTLE ski, that's like extra special. Like so small that you could carry it with you anywhere you where and even inside you had a little ski to look at and hold it in your hands.. haha yeah sometimes I let my imagination drift away. It just makes me think happy things whenever I read it.
aww thanks, i got the nick from primary school. my elder brother went there before me and he got the nickname ski for being a bit of a dreamer, when i got there i was known as ski's little sister, hence little ski. glad u like it, i havent used it for years until i had to think of username for this site. just came to me. X
What is this, a chatroom for advertisment?! This is supposed to be my poetry thread! :tongue: Just kidding
John!! My know, I thought about it after I post it and felt a little bad, but I had to tell her about her pretty name. I love it. m uuuuuuuuuuu aaaaaaaaaah
