~RAINBOW tears*

Rainbow Tears~

Rainbow tears,
Don’t you stream.
Giving away
My secret mania
Of offbeat theories
Thoughts
Feelings.
Rainbow tears,
Like the green of my wants
The red of my anger
The blue of my sorrow.
Rainbow tears,
Like the black of my confusion
As it fights
The white of my enlightenment.
Rainbow tears,
I run to force them
Past my cheeks
Off my body
Into the ground
Which knows the truth.
The truth
Of my offbeat theories
Thoughts
Feelings.
Rainbow tears.

 

Part 2~
A bout of anger,
A smile.
These tears of my life,
Never lie.
My rainbow tears,
Are never shy,
As they reveal the truth,
Of what's beyond.
Good
Evil
I’ll never stop running,
To wash away
These rainbow tears.

 

Cat, I love these! Are you going to continue
this in different parts?! I hope so.
Just the title Rainbow Tears brings to mind
very nice scenery, but how you described
the colors with emotions is something that
I wish I came up with.
Dont worry, I wont steal the concept (even
though I want to :tongue: )
Awesome work!

 

HAha silly John Thanks! I was thinking about it. I definitely see room to expand this poem further!

 

awww wow. rainbows really do make for good poetry. that was amazing!

 

That was brilliant. Innovative, I loved the concept. Truth, exposure. Something you can't hide. Keep doing these, I connect to something in them.

 

thanks! I'm glad you all enjoyed it