Thank you usfcat for your comment and taking the time to read my poem. im going to go and find yours now. X
This poem reminds me of the poems by G.M. Hopkins. “The wind shakes, the waves on the spiders web. Rain drops rest upon it. They look like trembling oars.”…I am probably misquoting Hopkins a bit (or a lot). Anyway, nice poem.
thanks guys. glad you like. i havent heard that poem rak, i will go and google search for it now and have a read.