Rainbow Days

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by little ski, Sep 20, 2007.

  1. little ski

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    usfcat CaterCreeps

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    That was beautiful. :):) I posted a rainbow one called rainbow tears yesterday. gotta love rainbows!
     
  3. little ski

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    Thank you usfcat for your comment and taking the time to read my poem. :) im going to go and find yours now. X
     
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    And I wear my expression like a rainbow.
    Loved this line, like glowing and radiant. :)
     
  5. little ski

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    thankyou hippyhappy. glad you liked. :)
     
  6. mojave green

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    What an excellent, happy poem -- makes me miss rain!
     
  7. little ski

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    thanks. :) i don't miss the rain, it never stops here at the moment. haha!
     
  8. Autentique

    Autentique wonderfabulastic

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    this poem reminds me of things.
    Its very beautiful :)
     
  9. rak

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    This poem reminds me of the poems by G.M. Hopkins. “The wind shakes, the waves on the spiders web. Rain drops rest upon it. They look like trembling oars.”…I am probably misquoting Hopkins a bit (or a lot). Anyway, nice poem.
     
  10. little ski

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    thanks guys. glad you like. i havent heard that poem rak, i will go and google search for it now and have a read.
     
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