The Depth

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by she88, Sep 22, 2007.

  1. she88

    she88 Member

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    I tip toe around this anger that is always found

    In the depth of this hole in your heart

    And i walk on glass trying to cure the past

    And the damage you always start

    And while your looking for you

    And the childhood you lost

    Im trying to pick up the pieces of me that you toss

    Around when your feeling blue

    And im always trying to get ahold of you

    I tip toe around this anger that is always found

    In the depth of this hole in your heart

    Its been there from the start...
     
  2. little ski

    little ski Member

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    she88 this is lovely. i really like!
    and welcome to the forums to. :) im new aswell, hope the poetry here inspires you to write some more for us to read. X
     
  3. nate87

    nate87 Member

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    i really felt the emotion behinf this, mucho grande praise
     
  4. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    this is good. i can really feel the emotion. Welcome =] happy posting
     
  5. she88

    she88 Member

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    thanks everybody i didnt know if i really liked this one very much.
     
  6. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I missed this one earlier, it's also very good. You have good rhythms moving inside your mind. I like it! Keep sharing.
     
  7. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Nice writing. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

    Peace,
    A.
     
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