A few recovered pieces

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Cassifrass, Oct 8, 2007.

  1. Cassifrass

    Cassifrass Member

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    I was able to recover these from an old hard drive... thought they were lost forever!

    Wasteland

    I have named you
    Far away chance of contentment
    That may never be

    I am hopeful

    Hollow hearted, wanting
    Surrounded by procreation
    Unworthy

    I am shattered

    Slipping, falling, drowning
    Weighted by guilt and medication
    No desire to be free

    I am defective

    The promise of you fades
    Swept under by the currents
    Of infertility

    I am empty





     
  2. Cassifrass

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    Knight Shift

    Today is old already.
    I didn't say the words burning my tongue. I didn't have to.
    The phone line was heavy with silence.
    You sighed; I knew you knew.

    Seven miles is an ocean; tides of hail and sirens crash on both shores.
    Nobly you ride those waves with your six-pointed shield; ever the protector, my hero.
    I'll sleep alone again tonight.
    You steal the covers, anyway.
     
  3. Cassifrass

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    Untitled

    Unrelenting eagerness
    Insatiable thirst(lust)

    Singing sleepy half-drunk poetry
    In between sips of espresso and each other

    Passion fueled by nicotine and new love
    We couldn't get enough.

    Feebly I would blink back the dawn
    Protesting the early sun's indifference

    Death, taxes, sunrise
    Unavoidable inconveniences.

    (You didn't know then that I'd be yours forever.
    I'm glad you didn't know.)
     
  4. Cassifrass

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    A couple of these are variations of poems I'd posted before... comments/feedback welcome.
     
  5. magixarts

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    My English is unfortunalty too poor to make any refining comment. Though i would like to mention that i like 'Wasteland' of it's dramastic character. We people are good in creating drama's :) better to say; 'humoristic drama's.'arent we?

    thank you for sharing.


     
  6. Vetty214

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    I assume the words in parenthesis are just your notes - they should be dropped from the final poem. For some reason this title came to me: In Paris

    This probably had nothing to do with being in Paris, but the poem brought to mind an encounter... where better to encounter new love but in Paris. I enjoyed this one, thanks for sharing. Vetty
     

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